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Why do angels fly !
Why do angels fly This emptiness that I feel makes me wonder about what is an illusion and what is real Why do birds fly away in the middle of the day sing their way when nobody has the time to hear Why fast moments make me cold despite the pressure they hold Is it the fear that my memories will grow old floods my eyes into tears Every time I think I might die I long for the angels in the sky to carry my soul softly till thy vision is clear These are the words I pray before I'd be burried under the clay that angels would fly me away to where I smell Heaven's breeze . . Ward . note = it's been long since i've last published prose or poetry written in the English language. So, i wish you'd like this kind of writing I hope it's worth giving a try ! |
in the middle of the day
sing their way when nobody has the time to hear it worths a lot miss ward i like your poem and the question you raised why?and i also join you to ask the same question you really surprised me thanks |
I try to fly .. Next to the stars
Stars shine every day in the sky Sci-Fi and travel .. And fills all the quarters, wared How beautiful soft your word always Distinctive in every way Mito |
Why fast moments make me cold despite the pressure they hold Is it the fear that my memories will grow old floods my eyes into tears Ward when we start watching and thinking about things around us, that means we start to enter the stage of cosmic philosophy and for me I think your questions and words tell me that I am replying to one of those philosphers that's you dear I really enjoyed your word carry on plz. |
many thanks to you dear ward for this great poem
I enjoyed it very waiting for the coming ones |
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................. There are some true moments in life that make us think about tiny matters and discover the great meaning of their existence . I thank you alot for your participation and encouragement . Ward |
[QUOTE=ميتوعاشق الفن;164202] I try to fly .. Next to the stars Stars shine every day in the sky Sci-Fi and travel .. And fills all the quarters, wared How beautiful soft your word always Distinctive in every way . When the material life can''t answer your questions , you start following your own heart .. it's your right . Mohammad You're such a faithful friend and a gifted poet It's a delight to read your words everywhere . Ward |
dear Wared, i was truly surprised when i read your poem, at the begging i thought it was something you read, and transferred it to us so we could enjoy it,
i truly enjoyed the words, the raythem plus the deep meanings that this poem embedded in its lines so you could imagine my astonishment when i realized it was written by an Arab speaking woman i raise my hat for you and your talent in both languages, you write beautifully, you are a very talented lady and we are very lucky to have you in our forum please accept my admiration for your writings Sa'aed |
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Why fast moments make me cold despite the pressure they hold Is it the fear that my memories will grow old floods my eyes into tears Ward when we start watching and thinking about things around us, that means we start to enter the stage of cosmic philosophy and for me I think your questions and words tell me that I am replying to one of those philosphers that's you dear I really enjoyed your word carry on plz. .... Every now and then , we need to spend a moment of meditation and think about how great our existence is . Miss Jordan It's so true that using our minds to answer some pholosophical questions , is a gift and a pleasure at the same time . I sincerely thank you for your encouraging comment Ward |
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...... It's not the fear of raising questions about life that makes us hesitant about asking it's the fear that we might not find the answers . B-happy I'm lucky to have this chance and share such personal thoughts with you all thanks alot Ward |
Dear Wared
am not going to add more words to what the members said I really admire your poem and this is the first time I read for a member who writes in both lanuages Arabic and English Although i am specialized in teaching English language but frankly I didn't find myself in writing in English as I find you doing , you are distinctive in that ,, really you are superior and amazing wared waiting for your poems many many thanks |
[QUOTE=صائد الأفكار;164288] dear Wared, i was truly surprised when i read your poem, at the begging i thought it was something you read, and transferred it to us so we could enjoy it, i truly enjoyed the words, the raythem plus the deep meanings that this poem embedded in its lines so you could imagine my astonishment when i realized it was written by an Arab speaking woman i raise my hat for you and your talent in both languages, you write beautifully, you are a very talented lady and we are very lucky to have you in our forum please accept my admiration for your writings Sa'aed ... I believe those who never think about death , can never enjoy life the proper way . Sa'aed It's an honor to read your comment here honestly , it's more than i've expected and now, i'm even more excited to publish more of my english-written poems . Ward |
angels fly to find the restless souls and to comfort them antill the time comes and carry their souls to the eternal life where theses souls live quietly in peace thank you wared for your piece of poetry that I liked very |
[QUOTE=أرب جمـال;164299]Dear Wared am not going to add more words to what the members said I really admire your poem and this is the first time I read for a member who writes in both lanuages Arabic and English Although i am specialized in teaching English language but frankly I didn't find myself in writing in English as I find you doing , you are distinctive in that ,, really you are superior and amazing wared waiting for your poems many many thanks .... The most beautiful creatures in life ... live in one's own heart and mind . Dear Arab what you've said is so true writing in different languages is not the same i even think that each language brings it's own emotions and ideas into the combination of words I also prefer writing in arabic because it's the true me but like to discover this world sometimes with another language it's a unique experience and i wish to publish more writings here after the great reaction from all the members , and you in particular thanks alot Ward |
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angels fly to find the restless souls and to comfort them antill the time comes and carry their souls to the eternal life where theses souls live quietly in peace thank you wared for your piece of poetry that I liked very ...... Those angels accompany both my dreamtime and my reality . قلب I appreciate your presence here as well as your words thank you Ward |
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