i want to touch the moon
i want to go to sky ...
feel am free
feel just like the butterfly...
fly in the sky ...
but i can't fly ..
as can they can ...
i do not want any friends !
just the moon..
talk to him ...
cry with him
hides behind the clouds
and be...
back again when the sun says
good bye
I want to be a moon
when he's tired...
leaves everything behind
...
i wont like to be astar
but a moon
stick to the sky

,,
I always have a dream

to touch the mooooooon
!$
.......wish you like it
written by a student in grade 8...

dear Banan
you have an imaginative wishes
you seems to be a dreamer
I enjoyed your poem and wish to read more of your writings
you are on a distinguish road
thanks

dear Banan

you are always distinctive as i once told you

it is a serious attempt to write in English

believe me .. you are wonderful

I expect to read more for you

God bless you honey

You do fly when you write dear Banan
With your words and imagination
you can cross all the borders
Your words touch our hearts
and I advise you to make use of the spelling checking programs
and I predict you'll be a great writer if God wills
.
with all my love
Ward

I like it Banan
you deserve
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