I want to touch the moon
I want to touch the moon i want to touch the moon i want to go to sky ... feel am free feel just like the butterfly... fly in the sky ... but i can't fly .. as can they can ... i do not want any friends ! just the moon.. talk to him ... cry with him hides behind the clouds and be... back again when the sun says good bye I want to be a moon when he's tired... leaves everything behind ... i wont like to be astar but a moon stick to the sky ,, I always have a dream to touch the mooooooon !$ .......wish you like it written by a student in grade 8... |
dear Banan you have an imaginative wishes you seems to be a dreamer I enjoyed your poem and wish to read more of your writings you are on a distinguish road thanks |
dear Banan you are always distinctive as i once told you it is a serious attempt to write in English believe me .. you are wonderful I expect to read more for you God bless you honey |
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thank you my daughter for this nice beginning
waiting for the followings saed |
You do fly when you write dear Banan With your words and imagination you can cross all the borders Your words touch our hearts and I advise you to make use of the spelling checking programs and I predict you'll be a great writer if God wills . with all my love Ward |
thanks banan
very nice |
good beginning
carry on banan |
I like it Banan you deserve http://www.arabna.info/vb/mwaextraedit4/extra/89.gif http://www6.0zz0.com/2010/07/31/13/348537376.gif |
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